Tuesday, November 27, 2018

Chapter 2:- An Obscure Past

Or maybe a broken future?

It had been nearly an hour, and there was no sight of the one he had been anticipating. And for the past fifteen minutes she had been sitting in her car with bated breaths, as the ‘Maheshwari Residence’ imprinted on the outer wall glimmered under the golden lights. Naina’s hands fisted around the steering wheel as fury raced through her veins.
“Naina, calm down.” Preeti tried to persuade, resting her hand on her cousin’s. She passed an empathetic look before gesturing her to drive inside.
“Why are you so insistent?” Naina grunted in misery as she switched gears to park. Preeti held the silence for longer than expected and decided to dodge that question, “Because I’m your sister.” The mock pride in her voice didn’t convince Naina as she gazed at her sister with scrutiny. Somewhere in her heart, Naina too knew the reason behind Preeti’s reluctance, but her mind was too afraid to admit. And she let it pass, like she had each time.

Munna and Pandit circled Sameer as their friend voiced a groan in frustration.
“I can’t believe after all that has happened between the both of you, you’re still so eager to see her.” Munna shook his head in disappointment.
“It’s not like that, It’s--” His throat seemed to have forgotten how to pronounce as two girls surreptitiously made an entry into the royal hall that echoed of Gujarati beats. Guests around him had started dancing to the tunes of Falguni Pathak, yet his feet seemed to move in the contrasting direction, towards her.

She had left her waist-length hair down; her slightly frizzy hair swept to one side. Her husky brown orbs enhanced her smoky eyelids while her subtle oxidized nose stud complemented her maroon shaded lips. She had decked him in a color that to him suited her best; black. Her full sleeved black ‘choli’ brightened with the specks of colorful embroidery while the same swirled around her long black ‘lehenga’. A netted magenta ‘dupatta’ carefully covered her abdomen from one shoulder. Her hands had scrupulously clutched each other while her lips conveyed a grim smile. She had constantly been admiring the fancy arrangements while he did the same to her. Because unexpectedly, Naina Agarwal had taken Sameer Maheshwari’s breath away.

Naina’s gaze finally met his as he watched her breath hitch. He had been cladded in an elite shade of maroon, the neck of his kurta racing deep, making her gulp. He had grown a light stubble on his face, which perfectly complemented his silky hair that reached his nape. The tinkles of her anklets echoed in her heart, as her feet took steps towards him. Preeti, who had been confident until a few seconds ago, now stood in fear. She knew the emotional turmoil his face revived. But she had the tenacity to face him too, and to make him regret his actions if he dare do anything to her sister. She straightened and cleared her throat, catching Naina’s eye. Preeti nodded in affirmation as Naina flashed a weak smile.

Munna and Pandit tried to stop their best buddy, but he seemed to have been hypnotized under her charm. One gaze and Pandit understood Preeti’s signal and immediately informed Munna. It was now or never.

Their faces were just a few inches apart, but memories delved deeper. She lifted her gaze to meet his and he realized how perfectly she was only a head shorter than him. A long minute of silence prevailed while inner turmoils decided to stagnate.

“Um, hi.” Sameer started, his soft yet heavy voice startling her. It was then that she noticed the flex in his broad shoulders and the flinch in his carved muscles.
“Hi.” She whispered quietly, her response sounding more like a question.
“Long time, right?” He tried to maintain a small talk when Naina interrupted, “Why have you called me, Sameer?”
Despite the austerity in her voice, his name from her lips erupted a thousand familiar feelings; feelings he thought he had killed.
Sameer chose to resist, “Well, it’s Navratri and this is a Dandiya party so it’s pretty obvious…” He spoke matter-of-factly.
Naina’s arms slightly crossed in front of her chest, while her face tilted to one side, and her lips pursed.
“Well, I’m sure you may have forgotten that I hate Navratri.” She gritted through her teeth, making his face contort in agony. He looked away and composed himself. Clearing his throat he extended his hand with two dandiya sticks, hesitant of her reaction yet determined she wouldn’t deny.
“Can I have a dance with you, Naina Agarwal?”
She took a moment to gaze at his tanned hands until she flinched at the faint marks in red. Grabbing the sticks almost tersely, she managed a nonchalant tone, “I think you owe me one.”

The beats of garba roared in excitement while Dandiya sticks crossed each other’s paths. Naina had started dancing in the inner circle with other girls while Sameer did the same in the outer circle. Changing partners faster than emotions was one rule Dandiya had taught them both. Dancing relentlessly for more than an hour, there had only been a few instances when their eyes had clashed. She had been avoiding each glance he passed, and he had continued to test her patience by gawking at her. In less than ten minutes they had come across each other again. However, unlike each other instance where she moved from him robotically, he decided to play with her.
“You seem to look overweight.” She looked at him, appalled at his tenacity. Gritting her teeth she responded, “You seem to look over egotistical.”
His head flung back in laughs at seeing her irritation while she muttered a few unintelligible curses under her breath. She wanted to get rid of him, he could sense. But he wouldn’t let her, she knew.
“Excuse me,” She said, handing back the dandiya sticks. Naina had only taken a few steps past him when she felt a familiar hand snake around her wrist, reminding her of old bitter memories.
He had turned on his heel to face her when Sameer’s eyes widened in astonishment. Her choli was backless; with just two hooks clasping both ends together. Naina seemed to have felt his hand tighten around her wrist as she smirked to herself.
“What?” She barked imperviously, as she witnessed another one of his dazes.
“Hello, Sameer?” She jerked her hand away and snapped her fingers in front of her face, grabbing his attention.
“I thought you never wore...such clothes.” He managed to speak.
“I also thought you weren’t judgemental, but I guess we both were wrong about each other.” She snapped sassily, her arms once again crossed over each other.
“We definitely were wrong about each other.” Guilt glinted through his tone, and she realized his words referred to something else, something deeply engraved in her heart Naina had longed to forget.
“Why did you stop me, Sameer.” Naina asked succinctly.
“You seem to have forgotten something.” He reminded, pointing at her ears. Her hands traveled to her empty ears as her orbs glistened, “I haven’t forgotten anything, Sameer. I’ve just stopped associating myself with things that remind me of…” She left her sentence incomplete, while simultaneously leaving an ache in his heart.

Naina dashed to the nearest corner of the crowded hall, away from his stare that made her anxious. Controlling her breaths, she blinked rapidly, resisting the urge to reminisce old memories.
“Naina?” Another familiar voice made her turn, though with rage as the only emotion evident in her eyes.
“Don’t you dare utter my name, Mr. Maheshwari.” Naina lashed out at Pramod Maheshwari, startling Sameer’s father. His shoulders heaved and he attempted to apologize, “I’m sorry for whatever happened.”
“I don’t need your fake sympathy, not when everything that has happened is because of you.” Naina scoffed back contemptuously, walking away from him.

Not sooner had her hands clutched the ledges of the bar counter when an unwanted voice whispered into her ear.
“Why can’t you leave me alone, Sameer?” She flung her hands exasperatedly. Inwardly reprimanding Preeti for shoving her into this ‘problem’, she sighed, audible enough for him to hear.
“Because, I couldn’t miss the opportunity to buy you a drink.” He teased, a lingering smirk on his face.
“What would you like to have? Fruit cocktail?” He scanned the non-alcoholic collection prized at the bar while Naina scrutinized with a stern look.
Sameer choked on his breath when he heard her order, “A glass of champagne, please.”
“A...what?!” He shrieked, his eyes wide in bewilderment. What had Naina planned to do tonight, surprise him with each action? First the selection of clothes, then the sassy comments, and now a preference for alcohol?
“A glass of something you seldom drink, Sameer Maheshwari.”
He looked away in embarrassment, cursing her for knowing his deepest secrets.
“I thought you didn’t either…” He doubted after a pause.
She waited until the bartender handed her her drink and sipped scrupulously. After an impatient moment of silence, she answered, “People change with time.”
“For some uncanny reason, I feel I’m the one behind this change.” He eyed the liquid in her glass before shifting his focus to her. Naina looked up at him, trying to decipher the emotion behind his grim comments, his almost confession.
Finding nothing she could snort at, Naina attacked, “Don’t give yourself so much importance, Sameer. Because you mean nothing in my life.”
Gulping down the entire glass of champagne, her eyes squeezed shut at the intensity as she signaled the bartender for another round. “Absolutely nothing.”
His brows arched in worry while his lips curved into a thin line. “Are you sure you want another drink?”
“What makes you doubt?” She composed herself while resting her hands on her hips.
“Well, from how much I know you--”
“No you don’t. You don’t know me, Sameer Maheshwari.” She interrupted callously as her eyes started to wetten. Surreptitiously hiding a sniff, Naina accused again, “And you never will be able to. Because you’re rich. The only emotion you people know is sympathy. And I, Mr. Maheshwari, am not worthy of your sympathy.” Her eyes blazed in rage while she gulped a second glass of champagne within seconds.
She had turned to leave when her feet riveted by his words, “How long will you hold onto your past, Naina.”
Her hands tightened into fists and she shut her eyes in attempt to maintain her calm. Facing him, she spoke, “Until it stops hurting me.”

“And that’ll never happen, I can guarantee.” She promised ostentatiously, the blaring expression that Sameer Maheshwari could never forget.

12 comments:

  1. OMG Muskan! You seem to be inching toward a pro with every story you update! I was amazed bt the language...exceptional!
    So the two have been lovers is my guess...they did know their deepest secrets...or had they been only friends...something had happened on one navratri...at the very same party? What had Pramod Maheshwari done to her? What past is Naina clinging onto? Mundit think Sameer suffers? And Preeti knows that Naina does too!
    The description of each of their attires was just on a different level! The way their eyes assess the changes brought in by time...the dance reminded me of the show as well...Sameer's teasing...ladka haar nahi maanega hehe...and holding her by her waist...commenting on her dress just makes me feel they were too comfortable to be just friends once...And Naina drinks? O bai...yeh to jhatka lag gaya Sameer ke saath mujhe bhi haha!
    On a serious note yaar...this is a really gripping story...your narration is wonderful and I'm already eager for the next in this series!
    Lots of love,
    Sur di

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    1. Sur Di! Pro...well, I guess you know who my inspirations are!
      Hmm...their relationship is something that still remains a mystery...I hope to reveal very soon. So many questions and suspense as the only answer...as of now...hope to answer all your questions very soon. :)

      I think you might've guessed the source of inspiration behind both attires; my creativity in fashion is very minimal and thus I have to resort to sources like these... :P

      What's a story without twists. Plus, I feel we still have the stereotype of men being the ones who generally drink rather than both genders; thus a change in the character sketches here. The guy remains distant from alcohol and the girl, well she seems to be well adapted to it.

      Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Sur Di! Truly means a lot!

      Hoping to update soonish... :)

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  2. Fantastic update
    But I'm too eager to know what happened in the past n how is Pramod involved in it

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    1. Thank you so much Aarti Di!
      Hehe...some mysteries take some time to unfold...let's see how long this one takes... kyunki...I guess you know what the next line could possibly be :P

      Kya karu, Aarti Di, main hoon aadat se majboor!

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  3. Wow! Just when i thought it couldn't get more interesting with all the mysteries surrounding the past, we readers are in for a surprise when you reveal Pramod Maheshwari has a hand in it, at least in naina's perspective!

    You have written so well, Muskan, I have fallen in love with how you have described their attires and then the ambience of the navratri...i feel, something happened on this fateful day that makes her hate this occasion!

    I am loving this sameer's won't give up attitude and determination as we all are aware of naina's stubborn attitude.
    And also a changed naina was refreshing then again, i wonder if it was an act to show sameer she has changed? You have me on the edge of my seat.

    I loved the whole squabble and curious to what all has munna, pandit and preeti seen in their relationship.

    Update soon!

    Love,
    Shreya

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    1. Shreya!!
      I hope to maintain the level of excitement you go through with each chapter. Because your reviews mean so much to me! Thank you so much!

      Pramod Maheshwari...and indeed uncanny character. Who was he and what was his past with Naina? Is he the reason behind the constant tiffs between Sameer and Naina? Maybe, maybe not.

      The description of attires have been inspired by real people and their selection of clothes because I clearly have no sense in fashion; so forget elaborating on it :P

      Sameer Maheshwari, always in action! A riddance to Naina and a best friend to Munna Pandit; just how we love him!

      I feel I'm not giving justice to Munna, Pandit and Preeti by giving attention to Sameer and Naina only, what do you think? I guess I'll need to work on that aspect...

      Will try my best to update soon...but I'm sure you're aware of my current complicated situation :P

      Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Shreya!

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  4. Chapter One's review:

    The verses at the beginning made me smile wide, the golden days of her show- the Mount Abu track! Heart The thing I love about music is that you can take things that are painful, deep things that hurt you, and you can turn them into something beautiful.
    In my experience, music provides relief and it has always been a safe heaven and also a route to escape from all the stress that is bestowed upon me.

    Sameer's biological father is alive and the duo seems to have a very good bond. Where's Vishaka though? And so I infer, correct me if I am wrong, Deepika is Sameer's full sister, not a half-sister as I can't see scope of another husband unless a divorce. Okay, I will stop my mind's ramblings. LOL

    Sameer and Naina know each other already, is it school? I can't help but wonder more about the past.
    Munna and Pandit's shocked What makes me feel they know her, so t has to be due to school, isn't it?

    Oh, Naina is someone's someone special. Embarrassed

    Memories are the timeless treasures of the heart. Who doesn't want to protect those treasures?
    Just like Naina, I am extremely possessive about my room and any changes are to be done, it will be done by me as the room has witnessed my first love and heartbreak, the incessant tears and smiles, the first joy of achieving something, the mood swings of me as a teenager and what not. Star

    The banter between Naina and Preeti was as endearing as much as it was deep.

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    1. Shreya! Thank you so much for such an insightful and interesting review!

      I really wanted to add this poem in this story because it not only explains the pain and numerous layers hidden within Sameer Maheshwari but also revives beautiful memories that we had considered obsolete.

      Sameer Maheshwari does have a father; yet the parental love remains incomplete. His past with his mother is yet to be determined.

      Simlarly, Naina and Sameer's past is too a mystery which hopes unfold in the coming chapters.

      hehe...well, change is the only constant in life after all. Though I too do not prefer changes in my room, it holds so many emotions.

      I loved writing their banter as much as you loved reading it! :D

      Thank you so much!

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  5. Muskan sorry I missed the story earlier but now read both the chapters and the prologue in one go... It's a wonderful story, plz someday think of being a professional writer or novelist, u have that talent dear, amazing writing skills and superb language vocabulary all makes u exceptional.... Naina's navratri costume reminded me of ashi's outfit for one dandiya event... And u have shown Sameer to have a normal family which I m assuming according to the recent update, with mention of his father and Deepika... So Sameer's father has some role in their breakup unlike the original plot where the bet was the reason of separation...loving the bold avatar of naina .... Looking forward to the next update as I m eager to know what happened in the past

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    1. Meenakshi! Thank you so much for such a motivational review! You don't need to apologize at all, because I totally get you! I myself find it difficult to find the time to read, forget write. With your constant support, who knows, we might fulfill this dream together. All the credit go to you all for always encouraging and supporting me and SamAina for the creativity!

      Hehe, bang on Meenakshi! Since I have little to no sense in fashion, I kinda stole Ashi's attire for Naina :P Changed the color of the dupatta tho, at least! :P

      Sameer Maheshwari does seem to have a normal family, or does he? And is Pramod the hero or the villain in their maybe love story?

      I really wanted to have a story with a bold Naina, so here she is. Bold with a few grudges and unhealed wounds perhaps. I'm so happy to hear you liked the characters!

      Will be writing the next chapter very soon! Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment, Meenakshi!

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  6. Hello My dear Muskaan..you finally have me here. Sorry for commenting so late on your post, have been very busy with grad school applications. Before I begin this feedback let me just point out that its been like few hours since SamAina have hugged and am not completely in my senses.

    Now coming to your story. You have a rare talent my dear, a way with words thats poetic, evocative and eclectic. It makes your stories, your characters and the moments shared between them stand out on the page. Writing an AU fanfic myself, I know how hard it is to manage. The different characterizations you have to incorporate, the setting, the rekationships. But its commendable that at a young age your writing is ripe with potential. Your characters are your own but yet conjoined to our lovely show through the bond and values they share.
    Naina's 360 degree turn here has me shook. Sassy, savage, bold, relentless. Like the Naina in our show now but magnified with the hurt wound she hides so protectively within her core.
    On the other hand your Sameer is the same like in the redemption track guil ridden, yearning for forgiveness, in love with Naina but not giving that vibe out effusively. Layered, complex characters that are flawed, realistic but still beautiful. I applaud you for this.
    The added mystery here that has set their fates apart. That element is very important in any story to keep the readers on their toes which you have done well.
    In all your story is the right kind of meaty to sink my teeth into. I look forward to future updates.
    Your dear impatient reader,
    Sims Di

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    1. Sims Di! I'm so happy to see your comment on my blog! Thank you so much for reviewing!

      I still haven't been able to get over that hug; have been watching it on loop on YouTube so my situation is relatable... :P

      Thank you so much for the kind words of appreciation, Sims Di. I'd credit you all for the constant motivation and our love for SamAina that brings in the creativity and courage within me. Other than that, I'd thank novels too; for not only making me fall in love with fictional characters that I associate with, but for also teaching me how to write!

      I've always wanted a Naina who's bold, sassy and independent; yet with wounds she chooses to hide, and thus writing anything with reference to Naina Agarwal is so amusing in this fanfic. I'm so happy to hear you're loving her too!

      Sameer Maheshwari is where my brain stops working, I guess. :P Or maybe I'm too caught up with the bet phase that I refuse to leave the guilt-stricken Sameer. :P Do let me know the moment it gets boring.

      Thank you so much for such a detailed review Di! Will be writing the next chapter very soon! :D

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